It ended just as i was getting into it, you should continue because i like the start

This was obviously full of emotion. But maybe expand it more. Put more of your heart into it, not just part of it. Wonderful poem though.
<3Raych

thanks for commenting my poem :)

It's the littlest poems that speak volumes

"Eyes shimmer by sorrow
Hope embraces, but not for tomorrow"

Lovely write
5/5
*Gem*

This was short but very good...it flowed nicely and the rhyming was good..

excellent write.5/5

Short, but it holds so much power.
The emotion running through this peice is so sad.It flowed nice, and you had great effect on the reader.

Well done,
5/5 Elaine.

Its a short poem but emotion flows through it so well! i could not tak my eyes of it well done! 5/5 keep it up

Too short but full of emotion nice poem....5/5 ^_^

Good work... i enjoyed this one.

flowed good and rhyming was good also.

5/5

It's quite beautiful. For such a little poem, it holds a lot of meaning. The flow was nice as well. 5/5

marcella

This is a good poem. It had a nice flow. I also like the set up of the poem, its different than most. I also really like this word combo,"Warm loneliness."
peace
soffe

Its short, but you have showed what it needed in the poem.
this shows you are a great talented a great poet, keep it up dear.

a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

For a short poem this has a lot of emotion I'm not keen on the lay out but I see know other problems with this piece.

I know that feeling its terrible and depressing, you're poem however is not terrible. very good actualy 6lines lines is pretty short but you described what you were feeling and trying to express in them so its still well written. the rythm was a bit off in some places... but i'm a easy marker so i still give 5/5 =) good job.

Such imnagery and imagination!!!! Amazing!

"Salty streams of tears brush against my face
Warm loneliness runs like a river through me"

Sounds like professional work to me, great job!!! 5/5

I really like it. Short and to the point. Powerful full of emotion. Keep it up.

It was nice...A was a good right, and I could just feel the emotion behind it..The flow was just perfect through out the whole thing, I felt it could have been a little longer, But it was really good...

5/5

Brief but breathtaking! ^_______^

it was amazing how you kept the reader wanting more cause you ended it so abruptly just as it was getting good.. =)

your descriptive words made me feel the moment as if i was the one in misery.. nice! ^__^

question: is it really "Eyes shimmer by sorrow", not 'of' sorrow?

anyway,
really liked it!!!! ^_______________^

It was beautiful, I only wish it were longer. Great thoughtful write overflowing with emotion. The second stanza that begins "Warm loneliness" broke up the flow a bit due to the 2nd line being too short but all in all it was a good poem. 4 from me

Purified precision...passionately pursuasive.
AWESOME>>>

Simple
stright to the point