Comments : Memory Lane

  • 16 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Hi
    :) beautifull poem
    can really relate to this

    " Too bad this is in past tense "
    Loved this sentence (along with the rest of the poem of course) because it 's kind of the clue of the poem, I guess...
    The times you shared together were wonderfull and you miss them so bad
    >> Too bad this is in past tense
    you'd just wish things woul still be...
    GOOD JOB ! :)
    Sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Beautiful poem..I really liked it..I think it was veryy good..keep it up..
    -sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    This poem is one I can relate to. The little things are the hardest part of letting go; such as the immature laughs and little smiles. You've obviously had troubles and seemingly handled them well. I love this poem, one of my personal favorites. 5/5. Well written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Awesomee wrk!!

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    I feel liek this too.
    the guy i love.
    moved away last year.
    && it just. .time to try and move on. "/

    5/5.