Thank you God for my family
Showing me all their beauty
Letting me take this life's journey
You bring smiles to me

This is a really beautiful poem. Family mean the world to me, and I can see that your family mean alot to you too.

Take Care.

Dear Cindy:

Excellent job .... :) Specially Last Stanza :)

Thank you God for my family
Showing me all their beauty
Letting me take this life's journey
You bring smiles to me

This is a very lovely dedication, loved it. You know the sort of poems i love reading from you, this is surely one of them.

You are surely blessed to have such sort of family.

And i could also say that you have dedicated a poem to my future daughter in law... :o)

all the best and take care

A very beautiful and heartfelt piece 5/5 it flowed together so well and the wording was great!

xD
~NinjaGirl~

Cindy, This is really a beautiful heartwarming poem. Yes nothing is more precious in world than our own dear family .

Love chavii.

Cindy, this was so sweet, you pulled of this form of poetry very well.
I loved it as always
love Tara-Kay
x

This is really good

Cindy,I felt so good after reading this piece of work.God has blessed you.You seem so positive.Keep it going.Take care.5/5.

This is a beautiful poem.
The feelings you have for your family are very clear, nothing but love..
A wonderful piece of writing.
Take care

Once again this is a brilliant poem, you real show that you love your family and thats is good and your poem is nicely expressed.

Thank you God for my family
Showing me all their beauty
Letting me take this life's journey
You bring smiles to me

awwe very innocent words. and very caring for others. great job 5/5

That is such a cute poem you captured the innocence of children cindy well done

Your family is as lucky to have you as you are to have them:) Also even tho we may not all have kids, it feels so "relatable" (know thats not a word hehe) but you know what i mean. Look forward to reading more of your stuff, cheers.

This was really good.Each stanza was very well written.A wonderful choice of words.This is another great piece of yours.Well Done!
Take care <3

Beautifully written! it says eevrything neone needs to say!

tc, AIsha

So sweet i liek it

Great poem Cindy, Keep up the good work 5/5

Very nice write cindy you've become a very good writer. a pleasure as always ben thompson

A beautiful dedication to your wonderful family.

And you bring smiles to me Cindy :)
I'd never read a Kyrielle before. Is it always as good as this or was it you that made it as beautiful as this? :)
take care,
-Marjan