Comments : Priestess All Dressed In Night: Dark Magic

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I love this. Your imagery is amazing and the wording you used to describe the story fits well with it. The length at first sort of scared me, not gonna lie lol; but I found myself so easily pulled into your words, I was entertained with this from the beginning to the end. Quite enjoyed it.

    5.5
    :]
    Heartchuu.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Wow... this is very dark and good.
    My favorite verse was
    "Weave intricate lies and scars of heart
    Not one can help but believe
    Quickening beats of a different dance
    You're all alone within yourself
    Go to sleep, you shallow soul"

    It appears that you have written this with ease. I, myself, cannot write dark poetry; therefor, I give you big kuddos for writting this so wonderfully.

    Nicely done.

    --Sher

  • 12 years ago

    by Cooper

    *applauds* (Bear with my comment, it's 7:19 a.m. and I haven't slept since Monday).
    Umm, it was very intense...dark, powerful. It fits perfectly into this category. Your words flow beautifully from the tongue, and then take hands with the wind, spreading their darkness throught the reader's mind. Or, something like that.
    I was absolutely astounded. You keep getting better. Am I jealous? Yes, I would say so.
    It feels like you write this with ease.

  • 12 years ago

    by ChaosKiller69

    Wow....that poem was amazing. Very well written...i give it 5/5. Well done keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by JaM

    Absolutely amazing poem. You certainly portrayed the imagery clearly and creatively. Great write, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I absolutely love this kind of poetry. It's completly bone chilling, yet so intensly mind captivating.
    Your poem was amazing.
    The imagery was breath taking.
    You are very talented.
    I litterally felt like I was there experiencing the poem.

    Amazing.
    5/5 Elaine.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This was quite amazing, very dark and quite captivating. The imagery was great and made for a very powerful read. Not to mention your word choice was outstanding and made the piece unique and interesting, which is good considering the length. Let's just say I was never bored. :] Great read. 5/5

    marcella

  • 12 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    Im not really a great fan of drawn out poems, although it has some ability to entrance the reader. seems like a fair write to me. (:

    Tom

  • 12 years ago

    by Poe Syndrome

    Well it had to be written at midnight it kinda explains it hehe GREAT poem!! your choice of words was awesome! its very interesting, im not into dark poems about magic, but this one i gotta say captivated my attention. good job! keep writing! :)
    dani!

  • 12 years ago

    by Reapers ZeitGeiSt

    I really enjoyed reading it...very nice work
    keep it up ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    This is like crazy good.... i really enjoyed reading this.. i love your choice of words,, it was amazing

  • 12 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    honestly i can't relate to this, well i don't really write dark poetry..base on what i see, the word usage is great, the lines are deep and so imagery of thoughts!

    keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    What an awesome read. It took me on a journey, and was so strongly written that my heart started racing with each line. I will definetely read it again, and, probably, again, until I wrap all the meaning of the words into a story I can play out in my head. This was indeed an awesomely, transforming piece which I could say, I loved.

    Nicely done, Danielle!

    ~Richhieeee

  • 12 years ago

    by Armada the Gestalt

    At first I thougt it was the woman being sacrificed. Very bitter... Satisfying in a sadistic sort of way. All I have to say for improvement is that in this context that its a 'rite'. ^^

    C: This comment trading is good, ja? xD

  • 12 years ago

    by yaneris

    It's nice i like it