Holding On (rondel)

by Viola   Aug 25, 2007


Your love is what keeps me holding on
Just when I'm about to give up this fight
When it feels like all hope I once had is gone
You can always pull me through the night

Your reassurance keeps me holding on till dawn
Then the darkness suddenly turns into light
Your love is what keeps me holding on
Just when I'm about to give up this fight

With you here all my fears are withdrawn
And the doubts I had simply flow away
Nothing seems to matter if you just stay
Looking in your eyes- my happiness is foregone
Your love is what keeps me holding on

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A Rondel is a poem consisting of 13 lines. The rhyme scheme is as follows: ABba abAB abbaA. The capitalized letters representing repeated lines.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow, I find this type of poem really hard to write myself but you did an amazing job.
    This was so well written, the wording was simple yet catching and the flow was perfect.
    Love always,
    Tara-Kay
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