You need to fix your spelling.
But i totaly understood what you wrote and i think its realy beautiful =)
and you did a great job

I really like it, it has so much emotion in it...<3<3

"That day we met i shall never forget,
I shall never forget you."

These lines hit me the most because it's so deep and I can relate! 5/5

Hey great job!! full of emotions...love it!! keep writting

I loved it! great job!

I liked it. Been thru it. Keep up the good work.

This is a beautiful love poem...
And it can relate to alot of people.
5/5

I like this this is really good 5/5

This poem is not bad at all... Seems to be out of experience... And you seem to know what has real value... that is a good characteristic...

You get a fat 5 from me ;)

This poem was amazing i absoultey loved it. it flowed and wen together perfectly. the way feeling of love burstout of this poem you would think you were writting about a love you possesed. i love it so much.

You are really good!

Wow, this is really good.

Awww. it was romatic in the start, but after it it was full of pains and sorrows.
i loved your last stanza alot. the real feeling.
5/5

This was alot better it painted a picture with emotion which is actually what a poem should be, a feeling! well done :)

A great poem writin by a great writer... this poem would be a great song

~shattered
dreams~

This is great! You are soo talented!

Awww i lvoe it good job 5/5

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