This is a very intense poem, it is really good. I could feel an emotion, kind of hidden. This is a great series, I really like it. It's so suspenseful and great, i can't wait for the next ones. Great job keenan, these are really good!

I loved this one i loved the whole serise!
such emotion and depth to it!!! well done!!! 5/5

What else can i say? the poem were simply beautiful though it made me feel like i'm hanging somewhere because the ending seems unfinished (yeah.. what should i expect? it's a series).. hope i can re-read it again in complete series so that i could decide and give a well deserve vote/comment.

Great flow
Well expressed and showing a great creativity and mournful feelings depicted. 5/5 sure

Tc
Fsams

It was awesome, very good writing skills you have. i loved it.

the way you explain it and describe it. 5/5

Pretty good..i better understand how the time apart is the climax in life..onward to part 4

Nice poem... DO you always write poems in a series... anyway, your poems are really awesome... you are a nice poet :D Keep up this good work

Sumit Ojha

Pretty good : ]] The emotions you displayed in the poem were really expressed well. On to the next = D

U survived away from each other and didn't talk. wat brought u back to each other what words were exchanged? or do i wait till the end for all my ?'s to be answered