When I Go To Sleep

by BreakMyWingsAndRun   Aug 26, 2007


Everything in my life seems so great,
like it's all fake.

You're always here with me,
everything is as perfect as can be.

You say you love me with all of your heart,
and that we'll never be apart.

I feel the same way,
we're together night and day.

My heart is complete,
it's a feeling no one can beat.

We talk for hours on the phone,
and you are never gone.

You are always here to comfort me when i cry,
never telling me a single lie.

When i ask you about our fate,
i then awake.

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I didn't do the best job of explaining my feelings in this poem but it's supposed to be that when i go to sleep i dream of the perfect life then when i ask him what we will do in the future i wake up. then everything is the same way again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    With out even reading your description of the poem, I understood what was going on in it. Beautiful........ I just... You're an amazing writer and you bring back so many of my memories. 5/5 on the poem. It was quite breathtaking...

  • 16 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    I look at it this way, you express your own feelings and thats part of poetry. I gave you a 5 cause of that and cause I have done the same. Great job