Comments : Wish someone would change her life..

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow waht great description 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Janessa

    U do a great job at ritin poems....i really like the poem...... WISH SOMEONE WOULD CHANGE YOUR LIFE..... i thought that waz really good...keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Janessa

    I really liked this 1...keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    OMG i luv this poem its amazing and some of the lines seem so much like me.
    u show great emotion and i luv the way you wrote it, keep up the good work

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Katelyn

    U no wat, i just dont get u wake, ur poems r so deep and thought out and its like idk, its like i wish maybe somehow u could get these poems further out there so that they can get 2 more ppl. ur able 2 capture so much thru so many of your poems and it's all from pure talent. you need 2 use it n life... let poetry take u somewhere, plz.

    Yet again, another piece nowhere short of great! keep it up!

    .:Katelyn:.

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    A M A Z I N G ! just amazing. like... omg wow. your have a great talent. that was... wow. 5/5 all the way!! ~KM~

  • 15 years ago

    by Aveena

    Wow that's really good..
    it shows your emotions in it good job

    Aveena-*