Comments : Blue Hour

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Blue is the color of life,
    and we are subjected to its beauty.
    for these moments, we gaze
    into the sky
    our eyes patiently waiting to shed a tear.

    i will hold this grace
    within my heart
    and fold my love
    into this hour...
    as we drown ourselves in blue.

    Very well written. Loved the two stanzas above. Beautiful sentiments and flow.

  • 16 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I wish!
    ...

    "often when the smell of the flowers is at their strongest." Neat.

    ...

    Makes me think of that commercial, for the blue collection, fruit of the loom, the song! YOU KNOW!
    I like the song, actually. xD

    I really like the poem!
    x

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I LOVE the tittle, your choice of words was excellent...nice poem!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wonderful write again.... well I learned a new term 'blue hour'.. i actually didnt know what it was...
    wonderfully described...

    "i will hold this grace
    within my heart
    and fold my love
    into this hour...
    as we drown ourselves in blue."

    ^^ I found it very captivating.... loved the last line... i felt as if everything around me is turning blue...

    good write...

    keep writing...