Nice poem, well written and thaught through. I like how you've portrayed feelings and emotions to a point you can almost feel them.

I like the first stanza the most, I like the flow and idea.

5/5 well done :)

Metaphors are excellent and flow of this poem is great. Very original and emotional piece. I like it very much, it has good atmosphere. 5/5

Wow.. it sent a chill thru me .. a very poignant and passionate write.. i loved the way ou described it.. a marvelous start to it and so was the end. its a complete poem..
i think this one is really the best i've read so far !

you have written an amazing piece..purely art..
i still cant believe how it made me feel .. and reading it again n again js makes me realize.

a great piece this.(my fav.)

~Wake~

Really great poem loved it

This was really cleverly written.
I loved the way you described the heart as having diff seasons.
It's was fabulously written
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

U are creative with words........

thats sad.......
wow.....
gd work.....