Comments : Lonely December

  • Nice poem, well written and thaught through. I like how you've portrayed feelings and emotions to a point you can almost feel them.

    I like the first stanza the most, I like the flow and idea.

    5/5 well done :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Nix

    Metaphors are excellent and flow of this poem is great. Very original and emotional piece. I like it very much, it has good atmosphere. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Wake

    Wow.. it sent a chill thru me .. a very poignant and passionate write.. i loved the way ou described it.. a marvelous start to it and so was the end. its a complete poem..
    i think this one is really the best i've read so far !

    you have written an amazing piece..purely art..
    i still cant believe how it made me feel .. and reading it again n again js makes me realize.

    a great piece this.(my fav.)

    ~Wake~

  • 14 years ago

    by tara

    Really great poem loved it

  • 14 years ago

    by Gem

    This was really cleverly written.
    I loved the way you described the heart as having diff seasons.
    It's was fabulously written
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 14 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    U are creative with words........

    thats sad.......
    wow.....
    gd work.....