Aww this poem is adorable...and its true too.

although in the first line "your" should be changed to "you're"

and in this line....

"Nothing & no one will set us aprat"

^^"aprat" should be changed to "apart"

but this is still a great poem.5/5=]

I really liked how you used the tittle as the closing line. It had a sincere effect on the poem:)
I like this one alot.
Keep it up.
Elaine.

Awwwwww i love it 5/5

AWESOME!!
LOVE IT!!

Absolutely LOVE this poem...reminds me of me and my fiance'! good job..keep it up!

BabyGurl

I love this...
your word are so true and heart felt.
It's good to find someone you feel so strongly about.

Aww!!..this was so sweet!..i absolutly loved it!!..i think its going in my favs.!!!

I love it!

Aly