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  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Wow its kinda sad but,
    very very good
    :]
    5/5
    keep writing
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Sadddd and I put my imaginary through this.. Keep writting more!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Lovely and sad. love the first stanza, could almost see it.....great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fake Facade

    Wow, really good poem. short and to the point.
    well short but it describes the emotion well.
    btw did i mention it was a great poem. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by fragiledoll

    Gr8 work.
    makes me wonder about guys, & how its nearly impossible for them to not lie.