Damn the man...fine stuff..

Uhm wow...this is interesting.... some sexual stuff here lol...i like it 5/5

Wow. Lol. :P
Now, that is a poem! Nicely done.
The word usage was good & the flow was flawless... && it was VERY unique.

"I have wet dreams and cocaine rise.
Damp socks and glassy eyes."

^ Wonderful job. 5.5 :)
-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Overall a good poem 4/5. The rhymes are excellent I would say. You can improve a lot my dear :)

Tc
Fsams

Wow this is a relaly powerfull poem, i love your wording and the rhyme is excellent 5/5

I fell easily in the presence of this poem, lying there, almost. It was perfectly dictated in the words of guilty carelessness and just straight truth. You could have changed the last line's rhyme though =] Still, beautiful. 5/5