A great poem that holds true emotions and i can relate to alot... i agree with your message withen the poem and the stanza that captured my attention was
My heart is not a plaything
My emotion's aren't toys
But it seems that playing with them
Brings guys great joy

i said something similar to this about girls in a poem of mine but ppl called me sexist, because they dont understand the contest and the meaning of it, what make you say the words you use.
but i understand where you coming form that is why i agree and i really like it.

I loved this peice. You could feel the past hurt disolving, as "His" love repair's you heart. I can truly relate.

*But that no longer matters
I've found the love of my life
He's everything I've ever wanted
He makes everything right*

^This stanza really got me, It's exactly how I feel about my boyfriend. I don't know what I would do if I lost him. I'd probably fall back into the pain of the past..

*He won't break my heart
He'll hold it clsoe inside
I'm truly in love with this boy
He's the reason I'm still alive*

^I really love how you ended this, Amazing.
A very good closing stanza.

Keep it up.
5/5 Elly. You deserve It:)

P.S I'd really like to show this too my boyfriend. If you don't mind. Send me Pm if it's ok or not:)

This is so nice. Asside from the typo in the last sentence of the last stanza I think it is excellent.

It is always nice to find that special someone who makes our lives complete.

--Sher

I really liked the second stanza, even though, to me, the flow was a little off. I just liked the concept of it. Overall this seems to me as a very heartfelt love poem and it's beautiful. 5/5

WOW THIS IS REALLY GOOD. SO TRUE. 5/5

Beautiful piece. Truly excellent poetry.
5/5

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