How cute =] ... and great story =]

Its very natural ... i like this one :)

Uhmm..that guy realy a naughty one...1st meeet and a kiss.. lOL... yeah.. i like this one........i agree this one is "cute"
keep it up!.... 5/5

-bryan

I like it.

I think this one is adorable. I almost felt what your emotions. Like i knew what you felt.

I love this poem it so cute and that awsome !!

So cute. ^_^

When I was reading this poem, I literally imagined me and my boyfriend on our first kiss. I love it. It's so cool.

Cute <('.'<)

Explains exactly what i feel!

Aww....
How Cute..
Good Job..
I Liked It... =]]

Are you in love with some one? your poems are mostly about the specific person. but it realy is nice expressed and very good job

Very nice :) 5/5

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Simple but really cute

keep it up

Awwww this was cute.....u can never forget ya first kiss
~KISSES~

Awwwww.. Wow, I bet u get butterfly after the first kissed. Sound so kute, u make it short and very kute on it! Everyone can't forget their first kiss, mostly is good and mostly is sucks. So mine is good and yours are good! Nice one girl!

Reallly gooood i love it