The Dawn Of Love.

by Crystal Gaze   Aug 30, 2007


The Dawn Of Love.
By: Elaine.C.

Trees Bathed in light,
stand tall giving shade,
as leaves rustle softly,
in the first spring breeze.

Newly bloomed flowers,
peak there heads toward,
the warming sun -as laughter,
floats upon the roll of hills.

The horses whinnied,
and clomped there feet,
as there two masters,
danced beside the crystal loch.

Her hand held firmly in his,
her breast pressed against his chest,
she looked up into his love filled eyes,
and knew he was the one.

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*I wrote this in about 7 minutes, maybe less. It just came too me out of nowhere, and I decided to submit it.
I hope you enjoy it. Please comment and vote, as it would be appreciated. Thanks, Elly.

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  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Waw you write it fast , but it could be better but you know sometimes we write it and couldnt change i dont know i realy love the last part when you say:Her hand held firmly in his,
    her breast pressed against his chest,
    she looked up into his love filled eyes,
    and knew he was the one.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    I loved this poem. I may say that a lot, but with this one, I mean it way more. You definately put a lot of emotion into this. I loved the last stanza the most. Great job. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    7 minutes?? Now that's talent for you!! Great poem!

    5.5**
    <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautiful...I love the imagery you painted here, really created vivid pictures in my mind, you did a wonderful job with this, it was very sweet.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    Yet another amazing poem. I would say poetry is your life. 5/5

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