Aww, this poem is really sad and it's filled with lots of emotion. I can relate to this poem very much and I really like it a lot. The flow of it was great! You really have a way with words. Keep on writing! 5/5

~Kristina

A lot of emotion, well written, great poem 5/5 keep it up

Wow! This poem was beautiful and just amazing. The words were flawless and you did such a great job putting everything together. I can definitely relate and that makes me love this poem even more! You have a way with words and truly captured my heart. Great job!! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Rikku~

Beautiful poem...check mine leave a comment i will appreciate it

Once again a beautiful poems...5/5

Great poem. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

This is exactly like me in a way.
=] i like alot
xx

Really brilliant.

"But all she really does
is put a fake smile on her face,
keep her head up high,
looks like nothings wrong and
pretend that she's not hurting."
- My favourite part, it has meaning and depth.
This was beautiful in so many ways.
I really liked it.
5/5, Nice work