This is beautiful. o_O I love how you capture the feelings of a lot of people (at least I believe) about life. I really love stanza two:

And its everyday
..that we still say.
We'll find our hope
..maybe someday.

=] reflects a lot.
5/5
x

A-MAZ-ING!

As usual. Ur an ausome writer.

And dont worry, I couldnt stop writing if I tried. And please, dont stop writing either. I can relate to ur stuff so easily too.

I really like this poem...I'm spokenless to the way I'm feeling after this one.I guess Cause i can understand it so well.

Wow excellent poem Wake! Really gets a person thinking. Kinda sounds like the after life will be a lot better than life on earth :P Yeah it sure has its ups and downs.. I try to block out the bad and remember the good. Helps a lot ;) Maybe I will be able to write another poem ^_^ silly school got me all distracted :p 5/5 Lovely poem!! Keep up the excellent work ^_^

Absolutely amazing! 5/5

OH MY GOD
I am left here in awe, jaw dropped, goosebumps all up my arms. I'm shocked. This poem is SO magical and like...... I fell in love with it!
Whoa this is.. phenominal. All your work is!!!!
5/5
No, more like 1,000/5

I dont no wat it is about ur poems but they're always the ones that rly make me think about life and what we're rly doin here. great job yet again.

.:Katelyn:.

Wowww!!
im soo impressed! u r such a good freakin writer!
its incredible how u make a poem feel like its a song! how every word fits perfect with other!
Im loving ur poems

Wow.. this was great!
Very strong and beautiful written!

Really love this stanza:
" And its everyday
..that we still say.
We'll find our hope
..maybe someday. "

Very good word choise.
I loved reading it.
Take care!