Comments : Maybe Someday..

  • 14 years ago

    by Birgit

    This is beautiful. o_O I love how you capture the feelings of a lot of people (at least I believe) about life. I really love stanza two:

    And its everyday
    ..that we still say.
    We'll find our hope
    ..maybe someday.

    =] reflects a lot.
    5/5
    x

  • 14 years ago

    by MorbidCupcake

    A-MAZ-ING!

    As usual. Ur an ausome writer.

    And dont worry, I couldnt stop writing if I tried. And please, dont stop writing either. I can relate to ur stuff so easily too.

  • 14 years ago

    by ShiaSuperman

    I really like this poem...I'm spokenless to the way I'm feeling after this one.I guess Cause i can understand it so well.

  • 14 years ago

    by Miss Behaving

    Wow excellent poem Wake! Really gets a person thinking. Kinda sounds like the after life will be a lot better than life on earth :P Yeah it sure has its ups and downs.. I try to block out the bad and remember the good. Helps a lot ;) Maybe I will be able to write another poem ^_^ silly school got me all distracted :p 5/5 Lovely poem!! Keep up the excellent work ^_^

  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Absolutely amazing! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    OH MY GOD
    I am left here in awe, jaw dropped, goosebumps all up my arms. I'm shocked. This poem is SO magical and like...... I fell in love with it!
    Whoa this is.. phenominal. All your work is!!!!
    5/5
    No, more like 1,000/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Katelyn

    I dont no wat it is about ur poems but they're always the ones that rly make me think about life and what we're rly doin here. great job yet again.

    .:Katelyn:.

  • 14 years ago

    by Vane

    Wowww!!
    im soo impressed! u r such a good freakin writer!
    its incredible how u make a poem feel like its a song! how every word fits perfect with other!
    Im loving ur poems

  • 14 years ago

    by Hebe

    Wow.. this was great!
    Very strong and beautiful written!

    Really love this stanza:
    " And its everyday
    ..that we still say.
    We'll find our hope
    ..maybe someday. "

    Very good word choise.
    I loved reading it.
    Take care!