Comments : The Memories Fade (Bedtime Smiles)

  • 16 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    I pressed the back button on your profile, not to offend in any way, but then i saw this title.. and i pressed forward.
    This was.. immense. It was brilliant, emotional, sad, loving, happy. It was a little of everything in small ways.
    I realluy enjoyed this. It's an amazing piece of work

    Cheers x

  • 16 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Beautiful.

    The only thing that made me stumble was at the end -
    "our dreams is over,
    just as the memories fade."

    *our dreams ARE over
    or *dream is over

    x

  • 15 years ago

    by undying blusher

    "empty silhouette" Yay!

    Beautiful.

  • 15 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Haha. Apparently I read this a couple years ago.