Hey! That was brilliant (even for an Orb!) :)

I do like how it was short but powerful. Good write.

Mo

It seems as though I can relate to so many of your writings. While reading this I had to pause for a brief moment while I thought what it would be like if someone would have taught me how to not only love, but also accept love.

I have a habit of pushing people away when they start getting to close to me and this piece states just that.

Nice... very nice

--Sher

The vocab used was perfect it really flowed well. Short yet, influential, excellent poem its superb.

Cicely-

Short and to the point. I like it. The flow was good and the word usage was awesome as well. I could definitely feel the emotions. Good job and keep it up 5/5

Short, sweet and REALLY REALLY GOOD!!! LOVED IT!! great rhymes, great rhythm, wonderful story/meanning. really well done.

Yeah i agree to them (people above me)short poem though very expressive and could really hit the person's emotion directly (to who ever u want to dedicate this poem).. well i guess everyone want not only to be loved by somebody but also to feel their real presence, sincerity and so on... great job, you did captured my interest..

Wow. it was short but you got the message across beautifully. the rhymes were perfect and it was wonderful. i loved it. 5/5

Now this one I loved! The length of it was quite effective and got your message across perfectly. The emotions were easy to relate to and the poem was overall a joy to read. Well done *5/5*