Awwwww. man, i know the feeling exactly. i loved this one. now all you gotta do is fix the funky stuff on there, the apostrophe stuff. =]

major 5 fix it up and ill vote for you in teh weekly contest. =] let me know when you do too. =]

This is a really good one too! it is really heart felt and emotional that is what makes a poem great! 5/5 for sure! lol

Great.