Hey,
i'm sure you know that there are lots of ways to help make life better then it may seem. although it may seem like everything is the same and that you cant do anything. there are little things you can do. go out for walks or try to visit friends. hit up the mall or go to the movies. everyday doesnt have to be the same old depressing days. i had to learn that in my freshmen year. i hated waking up because everyday was nothing. but now i'm a little more out there and i hang out with new people. just go places where you know people hang out and meet someone. and you'll see that things will get better!
This poem reminds me of those that i used to write! thats why it touched me and i had to say something. Hope all is better. Smile a little more

Hmmm.. what can i say?honestly, sometimes i can feel the same feeling, bear the same burden and asked the same question.. but that's how life goes, we all need to live with it and try to find happiness in order to live worth while.. over all, you're not alone and not the only person experiencing such problem, you have somone u can confined to(i'm blabing too much.. wahaha ang daldal ko)

back to the poem, a simple poems with kindda simple description but it holds a very deep and vivd emotions. and u perfectly bring it out in each lines, it's flawless.. great poem! keep it up

Beautifully well written...I like diz poem..I can relatee...thanks 4 the comment

-sarah

Beautifully well written...I like diz poem..I can relatee...thanks 4 the comment

-sarah

Wow very relatable this expressed yourself and your feelings real well and lots of people can relate to it. 5/5

laura

Wow, that's quite a heartfelt piece you've written there, but plaese realize this: life has it's storms that will bring you down and hurt you, but remember that you have to be weak before you can get strong. You build up by slowly but steadly lifting more and more weight, and it hurts, but in the end you come out strong and you're the one on top. 5/5 :)

This is a good poem... i feel the same ways sometimes... like right now.. i feel like my life is useless..but i know that something better will come by sooner or later.. just keep your head up and have hope.

the poem flowed nicely.5/5 from me.

It flowed wonderfully. Even though it didn't rhyme and the wording wasn't that great but something about it just really stood out for me. I guess it's just that alot of us can relate to this.
5/5

Fantatic i love the emotion..5/5 ^_^ pinoy rocks

I like the conviction of your write and the feeling behind it, a few grammatical changes would help it flow better. good job otherwise.

Your poems are beautiful even though i dont understand what they're trying to say i understand that they are a feeling that you're feeling and that makes them worth reading and that makes them as beautiful as they are another great poem