A shell vacant, lost in despair
A heart torn loose that needs repaired
My mind is gone, no eyes to see
Transparent... but for my memories.
^^^
Jeannie this ending stanza leaves me wondering if we share the same mind ....
Auntie your poem reaches so deep into my heart that I can hear the thud as it skips a down beat.
Excellent piece as always Auntie!

I love this, every poem of yours is so unique and I really like that about your writing. You were able to capture me into this starting with the first line and keep me interested until the end. Great job.

"Vacant moon, I see you glow
Upon the windswept icy snow"

^^ LOVED those lines.

5.5
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Jeannie
Once again you have captured me with this poem.

Vacant moon, I see you glow
Upon the windswept icy snow
That blankets all my hopes and dreams
And falls upon my heart it seems.

This stanza is so beautifully sad.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

This was a beautiful piece. It captured my soul and heart from the first line to the last.

Just four words: i loved your poem

Very breath taking i enjoyed it!!
keep it up!!

That was really atmospheric - it kinda captures the feelings that words wouldn't normally capture. Really enjoyed it.