Wow this was really good. I love the first 2 lines:

"This season is the time for happiness and cheer,
But look through my eyes and you will see a tear."

It gives a person an idea of what the poem will be like. Excellent collab. Oh and on this line:

"mines will not fly"

I think mines should be mine, unless you meant it them nevermind lol. Anyways Excellent piece!

Great collab, and very beautiful love poem.
My favorite stanza is:

-The words that I speak are never to be heard,
And all I want from you is your promising word.
No one ever listens to a word that I say,
All I need is for someone to point me into the traveling way-

Well done, 5/5 from me
The atmosphere is also great.

I know how that feels.. good job.. 5/5.. amazing
-Tylor

Wow i'm speechless
great work!
keep it up

Wow.. regretting and missing past events... quite similar idea to the latest thing i wrote i guess... funny no?
anyways i like this one.. especially the last 4 lines

Excellent Work!!

5.5**
<3

U sure do have a gr8 way with words dont yu!!..wel i really really enjoyed this poem...it had me hooked from the get go..the rhyming and choice of words were right for this type of poem.
keep it up
tk care
bree

Wow.
this is a reallly good piece.
enjoyed the whole thing.
i really liked this stanza :

"But instead im thrown on twisted roads
My heart trampled
people pick it up as a sample
and I don't know how much more I can handle."

its great.

5/5
xo.louii

Nice poem m8 i love these 2 lines

This season is the time for happiness and cheer,
But look through my eyes and you will see a tear
there really neat :) 5/5
keep it up love me

This is really good. I once could relate to this..

You have one copy/past mistake in the third stanza. Very emotional and every feeling is described on the very nice way. Interesting topic too, it looks like very honest poem.

There s a cople A's with squigly lines and a whole lotta question marks disrupting the poem, but other wise I found it quite admirable.

Hi its little lost soul. You commented on my poem Emo Kid. Thanks. I really like your peom it holds so much emotional its really awesome! Your peoms are so wkd. Keep on writing and i'll keep on reading.
X little lost soul X

Thank you for making the poem. So beautiful...

Holla~!--> Naughty Kitkatz

Thats real good hun thanks for the comment on my poem, ur doing great i got some more i will submit soon well anywho talk to u later

You are a really great poet, i love the way you write 5/5