I like this poem. There's just something about it...it's really pretty.

Excellent!
it was very simple, so lovely, so romantic!
try to use more deep words!

keep it up!

A graceful and peaceful poem.. also it was simple but really sweet.. a common poem, with common setting but still u made it beautiful..Keep up the good work!

I thought it was very sweet, nice wording. the way you expressed your wish was great. 5/5

It's simple, direct and has so much meaning behind it! 5/5

Really graet...it is full with passion and love :)

Awww.. i really liked it! it was short, sweet, simple , and to the point, what more do you want!!! keep it up! :0]

Aww this is so sweet breathtaking i loved it! very amazing poem