Good job on your poem. Keep writing :)

would u care
if tomarrow i never called u
and u found out i was dead
would u say "just another girl gone"
or would u say"i love her! how can i go on now?"

It is the worst thing to lose the one you love to death. I know this first hand. You have to go on. For those that love you. I hope you never have to feel this pain.
Take Care Cindy

Its good cant wait till its finished