Will you remember me

by xXxemzxXx   Sep 2, 2007


Will you remember me
two weeks later
i would like to know
because i know what your like
yet its still hard to let you go
you kiss soft and sweet
you seem so innocent
if only you were
my heart wouldnt be torn
and i wouldnt be wondering
will you remember me
baby cant you see
the way you held me in your arms
ill always remember and
the way you smiled
so light and free
yet thats not how you felt
thats what you said to me
will you remember me
thats what i wanted to know
that rainy day i told myself to let you go...

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  • 16 years ago

    by VSambulance

    Your writing was a bit broken in some places, with you stopping the rhythm, but that's besides the point. I'm guessing the poem is about an ex, or a lost love. I like it. good read

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    The poem was good a clear message the flow was good too I think I would do the last verse for the top part of the poem other then that a good read Plot121

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