Wow, that was very moving. I love how you brought nature into the poem. Very beautiful. 5/5

~Kat~

Very touching poem, I truely can say you a poem with nature involved was great. nicely done 5/5

I gave this one a 5/5, simple but beautiful. Flow was really good too, and it has a sort of mystery about it.

This is a wonderful poem. it is wonderful how you brought nature into it. it has a sort of sad touch to it. it is an amazing poem. 5/5

Kalee

Wow superb dear. Its great and the flow is perfect. Loved each and every line in this piece :)

Tc
Fsams