I love this. There are so many times that I can relate, especially over this last year.

"I've changed dramatically
I couldn't care less about anything
I used to be so open-minded
Now I'm barely living"

^ Just wonderful. The flow was flawless && the emotions were very strong. Wonderful job. 5.5 :]] Keep writing.

- Stephanie <3

I can relate very much i know exacty how this feels and so can alot of other people
it really does take something to be able to word your emotion some people cant even word a little bit of how they are feeling but you got it down grea job!
5/5
laura

The poet wries about himsef/hrself that he/ she has changed. changcn be goobu as the poet expresses, he/se i'not hapy about the change - the new poet.
Well I lik how he/she looks critically at himsel/ herself in search for correction.
A good piece.

I loved the way you portrayed this message, to look at the outside but also how yourself/themselves have changed in there attitude, it was brilliant. nice work 5/5

I liked it, it was a good piece
love Tara-Kay
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Despite the writers block its good, cliche, but good. the flow and rhyming rolled off my tongue. =]

I really like this one, I thnk we all find ourselves here sometimes. It almost feels like a song to me if you continued it. Good job.

Very nice opening, captivating ideas, a very interesting piece indeed.. but then the ending just confused me a bit (the last two lines in the last stanza), there's something in it that needs to be clear out (i don't know or maybe it's just me who can't pick up the right picture) well keep up the good work dear..

Depression is often a scary and lonesome place. Often it takes three times the work to reach out and climb of it then one could imagine.

You have described this scene all too well.

--Sher

This poem could've been written a bit more artfully, but, still, it has very well delivered emotions. I could feel your anxiety and I connect with this poem on a very personal level which, again, makes me like it just that much more. It's not a bad poem and it's written from the heart, so I give it a 4/5.

Like something, someone, or other, once said, 'Practice makes nice.' So, keep on practicing you have much talent, but a lot more potential.

Take care!

~Richiee

Well done!! This poem is unique and great. I love dthe wordings and the way you have strung it 5/5

I've felt this way before.. more than occasionally too. You described the feelings very well! Great Work..especially for Writers block!!

5.5**
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This reminds me off the last 2 years for me...i changed SOOOOOOO much! its possible but i don't feel like i need to change anymore...i just don't care either! VERY good! GREAT emotions n everything!

I liked this very cute and i hope you keep this up and get out of ur writer's block

VERY GOOD!

Nice bit to orginate out of writers block.
I'm impressed. This was morbid.. and lacked a little bit of form. But it was good. You have a nice style.
It's in a way.. slightly comforting,

Nicely done.
5/5

Good poem, confusing, might want to add puncuation

Funny how one day we wake up and we can't understand how we got to where we are, or how things turned so wrong. Fantastic job 5/5 GG23