by Nuh Sep 2, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Her tears are coming down like razor blades |
by Kris
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LIKE IT!! |
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The flow was a little off but I like the content, it is a good start. Nice work. |
by Windsong
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I like it |
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This is sad and sweet. I liked your choice of words and it flowed nicely. And yeah, you should write it as a story. ^_^ |