Its really a thrilling expressions and I luved its sound.... well penned... 5/5

That is a really well rigthen poam
it was almost like i could see that all happend
well done

Wow. intense

This is reallly good. I like it..=]

An amazing poem with a nice ending good job

I agree with Alex,this poem was definitely intense..I didn't notice it but I held my breath until the end..then my jaw dropped....haha.it was wonderfully written,I loved it! 5/5

I love this i'm adding you to my favorites