I think the title was good for the poem, and the ending was really good too, and yes the meaning was obvious.
This was really well written, sweetie, you did a fantastic job.
Tara-Kay
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The title to this is perfect, truly. The emotion and sentiments are wistful, sad, loving, haunting and heartbreakingly honest. Extremely well expressed and very vivid. Excellent poem.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka