Comments : Eternity

  • 18 years ago

    by Kris

    WOW!! It really makes you think. It is great.
    I love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "Let's focus on eternity,
    And how it is defined;
    Having no end or beginning,
    Unlike your finite mind. "

    These lines had the most impact on me. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Amazing! A truly inspiring and exquisite piece. I really enjoy reading your work, your personal style-slant is very intriguing.

    Thought provoking and melodic.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is an extremely well written piece. The rhyme sceme is excellent, the flow smooth and it has a very deep meaning/message. Very thought provoking.

    Peace, poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka