What a beautiful poem. You have caught the true meaning of friendship in this piece.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Well done. The level of feeling in the poem is enough to make you cry. Keep it up. 5/5

It made me remember....him.....
It hurt but it made me happy at the same time
I liked it.

This gave me goosebumps. It was so deep and personal and like.... This is my favorite piece b/c the words melted together like butter so perfectly!

Every time you were torn apart,
i sewed you up thread by thread.
You broke down and i picked you up
whenever you drowned yourself in regret.

Dont ever stop writing. I'm stunned by your work. 5/5

Uhh, it brought back a lot of memories 2 me that were a little heart wrenching but it's okay cuz i'm a little glad, it kinda let me realize i was a good friend. ur a great writer, and u should really never stop no matter how old or young u r. luved it.

.:Katelyn:.

Wow this is really good..
it shows what being a friend really means.
this just left me speechless..
good job. keep it up..

Aveena*-