Love it... So much of what I wish would happen for me *sighs*... But anyway beautiful. 5/5

This one really hit home. The flow was a little rocky, but acrosstic's are difficult. The emotion's one out in the end. So powerful, so familiar, so true.
This peice was beautiful and really touched my heart.

Well done,
5/5 Elly.

P.S I would like too show this poem to my boyfriend. Pm me if that is alright with you. Thanks:)

You always know just to do to put me into bliss

This line does not read right to me

Anyone can tell how much in love we are

This one too, I can't remember if you have to go by syllables if so I would go with Everyone can tell just how in love we are

Other than those 2 lines I thought it was a great write with good emotion. Nice job!

Wow!Great job.So much emotion in it that i loved.Definatley a great poem that truely touched my heart.

Kelsie

Awesome, deep. I love it.

-T. Jane

I was never a fan of people having their layouts.. "rehearsed".
Meaning that I usually don't like poems that follow a guideline.
This one actually caught my attention.
The emotion you displayed throughout this piece,
was probably the best I have read today.
The depth was wonderfully done,
and the flow was pretty good, overall.
Great work, keep it up. :]

I always love reading love poems they are so beautiful and yours is no different you did a wonderful job writing it 5/5

I often wish love was never ending, but sometimes it's easier to think it's never going to work. My girlfriend and I say Always and Forever and I know it will last, but once again it can all be gone so fast. Excellent poem 5/5 GG23