Beaten Down Love

by Whisper   Sep 5, 2007


Why do we gotta be that way?
Why can't me and you just say
I love you, you love me
Let's live this life peacefully

Why does it seem like a mistake?
You use those words that make me break
I fall apart inside and out
But you don't see cause you just see doubt

Why can't we make up right now?
I'll tell you why, cause you don't know how
You can't say you apologize
I see it deep inside your eyes

Why don't those eyes seem kind and true?
They seem cold, and so do you
You tear me apart for no reason at all
With no intention to catch me when I fall

So with that, I say, goodbye to you.
Farewell my dear and lover too
I will have no good memory of you to think of
But at least now I can say that I was in love...

**This was no experience of mine, though I don't doubt it will make sense to some. I just started typing and this is what I thought of. Let me know any constructive criticism you may have. Thanks**

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  • 16 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    I like this it really cool.seems really real like you have loved something and that someone did not care for you any more..its neat nice job..xoxo Rachy