Its an excellent short poem with lots of better sound and feelings....

Short and sweet : ) i loved it you will find love and when you do you will know its love the moment it happens anyway 5/5 <33

Short, but so meaningful and great to read. Also captures readers mind. Really deep i would say. Very sweet piece.
5/5 Keep writing;)

Really a little lovely poem. Reflects a sweet pain.
Keep it up. Want to see more of such work from u!!!
5/5

Wow! Those sound like some very incouraging words to my ears..good job 5/5

I like the way you end with the repetition word and ... its kind of hard to explain but in my head it just makes it even better. Maybe I'm just crazy and you have no idea what I'm talking about, but regardless great job.

Well said. We can't give up hope on love, but sometimes it seems that when we stop searching, it finds us instead. I like your free verse style.
*ME*

Good piece Ali... never lose hope you will often find things when u least expect them to come along..

Hehehe.. cute, it flowed so naturally... honest.. um..

awsome, i think u found ur self and also u know wat you want.

Ok good i like it tri to smile for some reason i like poems that talk about criing and cutting

Dont give up on love whatever you do, it will always be there even if you dont want it ,it will always find a way. you know its love if it makes you happy insde and out.