Comments : Take Me Or Leave Me

  • 16 years ago

    by hopeless08

    I really enjoyed reading this one. It's something a lot of people can relate to and I think it's well written. This of course is just my personal opinion.
    -hopeless-

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, very powerful and deep. I can relate to some parts of it. I like the rhymes in the whole piece, and the flow is excellent.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -My beauty's but a thin disguise
    For the soul which lives inside
    And you will never see the truth
    If you've never really tried-

    Well done, 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    This poem is definitely one of those poems which makes me happy. I love to hear poems which express of what I feel about myself, and life. This was was an extraordinary read, thanks for it.

    ~Richie