Beautiful flow.
i loved it, 5/5

It reminds me of my grandma..died few years ago..i cried so much becoz i do care a lot for her..
by the way this one is awesome..you describe it well..the emotions and flowed suits out right..

for whom do you dedicated it to?
5/5 for it!!

Well written, perfect flow, amazing word choce brillant vocab, the emtions were clear and strong, and so was the message. excellently done, no room for improvement 5/5

This is a very beautiful poem you have here. The details in the first stanza struck me really hard. And, the ending caped it off as well as you posibly could. I liked reading this quite a bit. Don't quit, you write really well.

I am really tired so I shall do your other one's tommorow. Thanks for your feedback.

Take care.

~Richie...