You

by samantha   Sep 6, 2007


You are my true love.
You were my best friend.
You were my first for almost everything.
You and me are nothing now.
You were the one that take my heart.
You elso broken my heart.

please tell me what you think of my poem.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Malboros pipe

    I Think the second word on the last setence is meant to be "also broke"

    Not elso broken, sorry im a perfectionist

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Hey good poem but work on grammar and spelling
    spellcheck all your work,it's sweet otherwise
    take care love
    -Lisa

  • 16 years ago

    by samantha

    Thank you for much

  • 16 years ago

    by Farah

    I really like it thats how i feel u kno?

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