Wow, very powerful, I love every line. It has great flow and rhythm of this piece is incredible. Ending is also excellent and you painted your emotions superbly. Atmosphere that you created is amazing. I am awe...

Oh well, hell yes, please write more just like this so i can travel somehwere far away into into the arms of someone i took for granted a 1000 days ago, is that a comment?...whatever, it works for me, and so does this poem...5 for sure..thank you

It is deep and powerfull.
I'm crazy about your vocabulary, and your way with words.

I love the first stanza, it is my favorite. The last line of the 3rd stanza feels like it is missing a word to me. Other than that I thought it was very mystical and intriguing, it made me think of the time I painted my soul, ones interpretation can be amazing. You did a very good job. Thanks for enetering the contest.

From reading this poem I saw, invisioned, or tried to invision, what the pictures you were trying to portray; and, while doing this I came across some creative feeling-sights, where I felt the waves and the clouds and the shadows passing over me. I think this is an awesome read, although it could use improvements in the delivery of the lines, the details were extravagant. Continue to write, you have much talent. Bon Voyage!

~Richiee

This poem was very powerful. You created wonderful imagery with your amazing vocab and the flow was really nice. 5/5

marcella

Oh yeah, another wonderfully written piece. You're a really talented writter. You really have a good word choice, keep it up. I think your poems have all the poetic essence in it. Good job.

5/5 as always.

Ending is very powerful and whole poem is wonderful!!

AND first stanza is, oh my, even beauty of devil can't compare with amazing atmosphere of it.

Excellent and powerful. Another thought provoking write that absorbed my attention to the fullest. It flowed nicely and was very interesting. I loved the final stanza, it gave me chills and I dont knoow why haha. Im a looney pea..sorry but this was pure perfection girl!

Awesome vocab portrayed in all of your poems... very imaginative.