Comments : Still Free

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very well written poem about an issue that is of course emotional I like the way you expressed your feelings no holds barred and your dismay for injustice

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    This is very sad!!!
    It's very well expressed and i could really feel the emotion!! Great poem, and keep writing!!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow. You were right. It was a very emotional write. I had the image of the judge and his declaration of innocence. What a sad piece. It was very well written. What a horrible feeling to know that someone has gone free even though they are guilty. I'll be sure to read some more of yours. :]
    5.5
    Ciao~

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Emotional poems you penned here, tell the truth yet You expressed them within beautiful emotions.....Well done!

    "Judge your success by what you had to give up in order to get it."

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Penned Beautifully!....

    The emotion's coarsed through every word... This was an effective peice.
    I really love how you used a situation that was known to us...

    Well done,
    Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    This is an inspiring poem for people like me who are new at not rhyming.5/5 thanks for a good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Very well written poem, but so sad.. the emotions in it really stood out the way you wrote it.. and it was so descriptive, its like being there.. very good poem.

    Good Job =]

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    Really well written.. i really liked it..

    nothing bad i can say

    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Lovely poem and flowing good. Its unique in tems o fthe wordings and the flow 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Way better than the other one I read. This was wonderfully written and I liked the structure. This poem was very unique and flowed very well. You expressed your emotions wonderfully as well.
    5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    A great poem, more story like but still very emotional and very sad. Flowed great so it was really good to read it. Also, got pictures in my head. Beautiful. I hope that didn't happen to you.
    Keep it up. 5/5