This is so cute.
&& sad.
i really love it.
=DDD

This is AWESOME keep up the GREAT WORK!!!

Beautifuly written... <3
i was once in this position... it hurts for now but it will get better.. either someone will come along even better or he will realize love is waiting right in front of him...

Aw this is so sad, it totally know how you feel...it sucks! great poem thoughm keep up the wicked awesome writing

It was a great poem. you have some minor errors though.

try not to use a lot of I's in your poems coz it sometimes messes up the flow.

(Youre) a flawless angel, with such integrity
(You are) so incredible and you mean so much to me
- You're or You are < your choice

(Id) give you all of my heart, if only you could see
(Id) talk to you forever, but in silence I still stay
- I'd

Keep up the good work :)