Tortuous Obsession

by DeathlyAmore   Sep 8, 2007


How desolate you make me feel,
With every turn, you present your back to me.

As much as I ratter on to say "I love you",
You sigh with a look, your annoyed be.

Sprung as I am, chained to you forever,
To deal with the agony, your tortures to me.

What makes me stay, I will never know,
dealing with abyssmal emotions that i'll never show.

A secret to be, my tormented emotions well hidden,
With a thorn in my heart, torn and beaten.

I am SPRUNG with your cruel ways, I can not deny,
Still I feel happy, only because nevertheless,

You are mine.

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A poem to interpret.

My main Idea, plot, thesis;

"Your cruel to me....
I say I love you but you turn your back to me.

Why I still wish to be with you I do not know.
My emotions feel hurt, abandoned, ignored.

But I keep it a secret.

Obsessed and sprung, wrapped around your finger is where I stand.
Sadly, I am happy where I am, regardless of my desolate emotions."
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"I shall always and forever be..."
[Deathly'Amore]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    I like this poem. i like most of your poems. keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Flawless, as always.
    I'm glad to see that you're writing again. :)

    "What makes me stay, I will never know,
    dealing with abyssmal emotions that i'll never show."

    ^ No particular reason, but I love that couplet.

    Overall, friggin fabulous. :]] 5.5
    - Stephanie Lynn .+.