Thats a different style, you have a talent as you have really made this unique. well done xx

Ii LiiKED DAT. EVEN iiF y0U HADNT PUT THE LiiTL AFTERNOTE THiiNG @ DA B0TT0M, ii STiiL UNDErST00D WUT y0U WErE TALKiiNG AB0UT. AN ii TH0UGHT iiT WUZ G00D. :-)

Aw another great poem...the whole perspective thing was a good idea and it turned out really well...good job!

Brooke<3

Great poem
i understood wat u were saying even without wat u wrote at the bottom

Sad :) but awesome!

That was really great man! i love your poems! they are moving!

This poem was very intresting. i enjoyed reading this very much. i had felt like this b4 but couldnt put it into words. fine job..5/5