Nice one

This poem was pretty good and i liked the way that you reapeated lines

"YOU'LL BE OKAY
I'VE GOT TO GO MY OWN WAY."

but there wasnt as much emotion in it as i thought there should be

I really liked this one alot too...reminded me of a certain someone once...owell. lol very good AGAIN! keep it up! but you could put more emotion into it...its still very good tho!