Comments : Take the chance

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    OMG OMG. I fcuking love this SO much. I feel like the exact same way RIGHT NOW about someone. I hope this isn't JUST a poem for you, I hope it's the real thing. Cuz you deserve to be happy. I love it. 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Fade_t0_bLaCk

    I absolutely love this poem. 5/5 and keep em comin!

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Wow this is amazing..u sure do have a wonderful way with words!!
    i hope to read more definitly like this one soon
    tk care bree
    5/5

    plzz RRC any of my poems that catch ur fancy
    tk care

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This is such a beautiful poem. In so many ways, I can connect to this. I have been through this and am actually going through it right now. I even wrote my own poem like this one.. it's very amazing. You have a way with words and I loved every single line. It's so organized and neatly written. Great job! Please keep up the excellent work! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Rikku~

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    I love it! It is so cute and I can relate to this tremendously. (sp) Lol. But your flow is flawless and your overall concept is amazing. I can really feel some emotion in this. Great job!
    5/5

    Amber..

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Heyy aww this was soo beautiful i really liked this poem, especially this verse:
    "I find myself looking at my phone
    To see if I missed your call
    Checking every second on myspace
    To see if you've been on at all"
    i no exactly wht u mean great job xx

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Aww. I really liked this. I felt like I was writing it. Lol. But great job. Your flow was flawless and the emotions expressed were beautiful Overall, spectacular job!
    5/5

    Amber...

  • 16 years ago

    by Blacksand

    Great flow I love the imagery, I've felt the exact same way more than once. 5/5 Keep it up!