So beautiful and meaningful, truly greatly written. It holds a lot of emotions, and you did a great job with rhymes.
Great wording in the whole piece, too and very captivating atmosphere.
Keep up, 5/5 from me :)

Beautiful written yet so inspiring....even though simply but well sending good message...well done!

So special "loving you will always be my duty" Wonderful poem and beautiful words.

Pamela G.

Wow I liked teh woridng and topic here so much
Your descriptions was almost real and your flow was great

My fave lines are;

rain allows things to grow right
watching life grow is time well spend

So cool
Take care
Your friend,
Laura

Another great piece you've out done yourself this time my friend 5/5

Wow, it is so powerful and beautiful. I enjoy reading it, good message and you described things superbly. Well done!

Aw!!
Love it, so sweet.
Just a little poem full of beauty and sweet things. Pleasure to read. I enjoyed it very much. (5/5)

Kelly
xx

Super..

simply great.
short and simple and darn amazing.
great one

"..And loving you will always be my duty.."

Superb piece this

~Wake~

Great poem, keep it up

Excellent!

Simple and short but very expressive..

keep it up!

Wonderful Writing!! I enjoyed reading this!

5.5**
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Nice and short, love it.