I know that is was supposed to be dark but it was kind of saracstic too. I love it. Great job. 5/5

Good idea!!
you did describe it well!!
simple yet so descriptive!!

keep it up!

This is another pretty good poem although not my favourite, but that dont mean its any less powerful. I like the way you have created the image of a monster in this poem loved it :D well written xxx alex xxx

The rhetorical questions in this piece really engaged me. I like the poem very much and I also had a "that kind of day" and I can relate it well :)

5/5 all the way

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Lol, your descriptions of the seven deadly
sins are truly amazing, you described
every single one perfectly. i am so adding
this into my fave poems. i loved the whole
piece, it was flawless, not a word out of place.
5/5

"Pride? who says I'm proud?
Is knowing your better wrong?
It's not my fault I'm perfect,
they've known it all along."

^^ Hahaha, that made me giggle for some reason, maybe I just have a twisted sense of humor.

I enjoyed this, I thought it was wonderfully created and original, and very powerful and intense throughout.

Flow was great throughout the whole piece and the imagery was wonderfully displayed.